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-It's Cold-

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It's cold.
Maybe it's the wind-
it knows i have sinned.

It's cold.
Maybe it's the frost-
it knows I am lost.

It's cold.
Maybe it's the snow-
it knows what I know.
Heh. This is what happens when I get into poetry.
Any suggestions on how I can improve this, ladies and gents?

:D I'll be waiting.
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FractalMonster's avatar
You can really rhyme :clap: Nice :D